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The Christian teen fantasy entitled Hafren: A Fantasy for the Young at Heart is now available. The novel received a great review from the Midwest Book Review and is available from amazon.com and from the Lighthouse Christian Publishing website fantasy page two.
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Joined: 11/17/2011
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Hi, Craig. Your editorial review (from Midwest Book Review) contains phrases that do not make a good impression, especially in a professional endorsement. Even if it's a Midwest colloquialism (use to instead of used to) it should be put into standard English.
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I'm just saying, you need to put your very best foot forward. I think about this stuff all the time, for I will be getting my thing up one of these days. Good luck!
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--edited by Mimi Speike on 8/3/2013, 12:21 PM--
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