Joined: 3/13/2014
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I just updated a story I entitled Revenge - Served Cold. Worried about the title as it is a bit cliche and there are a number of books with the same title out there. Still, I'd like some feedback on the manuscript. Please stop by and give it a look see. I marked it as suspense thriller because it is about two college kids who are kidnapped. The plot travels from their incarceration, rescue, and a second kidnapping before the culprits are apprehended (sort of). There is also elements of mystery, romance, and perhaps even a touch of humor although the main thrust of the story is the kidnapping and recovery of the victims.
Give it a look see and let me know what you think. Good or bad, just be honest.
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Joined: 6/7/2013
Posts: 1356
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Hi there! Thanks for posting about your story here on the message boards. You've already got 3 books up which is just fantastic, and thanks for jumping into reviewing.
Let me know if you need help with anything!
Lucy
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