Joined: 9/4/2014
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Hi everyone, I just posted the first chapter of my manuscript. I am currently re-doing the POV of the story from 1st to 3rd limited. I need someone to look at it that reads a crazy amount of commercial fiction and other like books to tell me how it reads. Thanks a bunch!
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Joined: 6/7/2013
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Hi @Wordburner65! So glad to see that your manuscript is up for peer review. You should also post about it (with a link) on this thread so that people browsing for mysteries to read will see it.
I see that you did already get some feedback, too. Anything give you any epiphanies yet?
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