Joined: 4/26/2011
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Here it is. I'd love some feedback. Does it grab you, does it make you want to find out more? Thanks in advance!
The song of a Syrin. The arrival of a wandering Prophet. The death of the Covenant Tree. All signs of the imminent storm. Yet young Voran has a secret hope - the Living Water is rumored to have appeared again after a thousand years. The Living Water, which will disperse all evils. The Living Water, which can potentially give immortality. But Voran is not the only seeker. Hard on his heels is a ruthless enemy - the Raven, a dark spirit who has the power to possess men's bodies and wills. Torn between the promise of Living Water and his own hidden desires, Voran must face an evil that never shows the same face twice. But the more Voran knows, the more he begins to fear: What if the only way to save his people is to let them be defeated?
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Joined: 2/27/2011
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Bumping this up so others see it!
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Joined: 4/26/2011
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Thanks Colleen!
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